Selasa, 23 September 2014

Technology

The influences of over using technology. The people sometimes over using technology, until they unrealized with the situation, where are they, where are they sit, with who are they, etc. They forget about that and just focus to the gadget. But also for adult, the children too. Because the children and gadget very close. If their parents give the gadget and lose control, their children can play games all day and they don't have friend, even they dont want play with their friends then they will be individualism. Their communicate will limited in the real life. They just communication through social media. They dont care about their real life, the truth function of gadget, their relationship. So, that some the reason that people dont over using technology.

2 komentar:

  1. Nice writing. But, we know that the first sentence is topic sentence. I think it is not topic sentence.
    And in 4th sentence, NOT ONLY...............BUT ALSO

    BalasHapus
  2. Really?? Hehe,, maybe you can give me some suggest about the topic sentence??
    Ok thank you lilik, i'll be revision my writing..

    BalasHapus